This week we have been creating our own characters and putting them into our own stories. I chose Wally the Wicket. It's about a cricket wicket that runs away from home because he doesn't like getting hit by the ball.
Have a good look at it and leave me a comment.
Friday 23 November 2018
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hey shjon i lve how you have soo much detail keep it up
ReplyDeleteka pai
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Thank you
DeleteHi Shjon this is Thom from rimu.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog. I like how you have blogged a story, because not many people do that and it is a good idea to try blog something else, and now you can get feedback on your story. I really liked your story, and it was detailed really well.
Thanks thom I miss you guys
DeleteTell laura I said hi and also Hasan
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