This week I have been working on a story based on true friendship. I have been practicing using capital letters and full stops.
Friday, 28 September 2018
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Hi Shjon,
ReplyDeleteYou have worked well on this story, it looks great! I like how you have used so many different skills on shapes to illustrate it to keep your reader interested, ka pai! Next time make sure that you use even more strong describing words to paint a picture for your reader :)
From Miss W
hi shjon your old man who liked an apple book its so funny but I liked you cappital letter and fall stops you did a great job from Hasan
ReplyDeletethank you hasan
DeleteHi Shjon it's Louis. I loved your post because it had lots of words. also i like it because there were pictures too. The was nothing wrong with your post. Can't wait to see your next one!!
ReplyDeleteDear shjon
ReplyDeletei really like your book but ad some full stops and capital letter and ad 1 more sentinses